Hello, Fruitcake here with my new artwork. As mentioned in the title, this is my submission for last weeks art battle.
The topic or theme was the anime Bungo Stray Dogs, which is one of my favorites. With that, I drew my favorite female character, Kyouka. Anyway, this art battle was against Patboi in which (spoilers) I won. Still, even with the win, evaluating it now, I have a few comments on the overall piece.
I think my line art here is next to useless. It is too thin that it doesn’t indicate folds. The strands on the hair, I think are too thick, and they seem kind of static. Also, looking at it closely, the shadow work on the ribbon looks lazily done. Lastly, I’m not a fan of how I colored the hair.
Still, even with all that, I think this is my best work so far. I’m getting more and more comfortable with my art style, and honestly, I feel I’m getting more efficient, and that makes me much more confident in my works.
Anyway, thanks for reading. Be sure to visit my profile in MyAnimeList and please comment on any suggestions or criticism for my artwork.